Showing posts with label Lynn Minmay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Lynn Minmay. Show all posts

Monday, October 2, 2023

1-06. Daedalus Attack/Blitzkrieg.

Hikaru takes a photo with Minmay on the eve of his first mission.
Hikaru takes a photo with Minmay on the eve of his first mission.

Super Dimension Fortress Macross: Daedalus Attack

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 14, 1982.
Written by: Sukehiro Tomita. Directed by: Noboru Ishiguro, Fumihiko Takayama.

Robotech: Blitzkrieg

Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 11, 1985.
Story Editor: Steve Kramer. Directed by: Robert V. Barron.


PLOT - MACROSS:

Two months have passed since the Macross's modular transformation. The city has been rebuilt, and life for the civilians has returned to something approximating normality. Hikaru has completed his training to become a Valkyrie pilot and is enjoying his first day of leave with Minmay - but a series of awkward coincidences lead him to an uncomfortable encounter with First Officer Misa Hayase.

Meanwhile, Capt. Global prepares a bold plan to throw off the Zentradi pursuers. He will use the rings of Saturn to disrupt their sensors, but not in an attempt to escape. Instead, he will launch a counterattack with the Macross's fighters, using them to draw the enemy into range of the ship's big gun.

Hikaru's first battle as a fighter pilot is about to begin, leaving him to worry that it might also be his last...


PLOT - ROBOTECH:

Two months have passed since the SDF-1's modular transformation. The city has been rebuilt, and life for the civilians has returned to something approximating normality. Rick Hunter has completed his training to become a Veritech pilot and is enjoying his first day of leave with Minmei - but a series of awkward coincidences lead him to an uncomfortable encounter with First Officer Lisa Hayes.

Meanwhile, Capt. Gloval prepares a bold plan to throw off the Zentraedi pursuers. He will use the rings of Saturn to disrupt their sensors, but not in an attempt to escape. Instead, he intends to launch a counterattack with the SDF-1's fighters, using them to draw the enemy into range of the ship's big gun.

But no plan survives contact with reality. When the ship's new Pin Point Barrier system interferes with the main gun, it's up to Lisa to improvise a daring solution...

Hikaru has an uncomfortable run-in with Misa - who is now his superior officer...
Hikaru has an uncomfortable run-in with
Misa - who is now his superior officer...

CHARACTERS:

In Macross, significant focus is given to Hikaru's pre-mission anxiety. He feigns cheerfulness to Minmay, but he's privately wondering if his first contact with the enemy will also end up being his last. The Robotech episode deliberately reduces this aspect, trimming away one scene of him worrying and adjusting the dialogue and tone of the first half.

Minmay is equally clueless about the reality of his situation in both versions, congratulating him on his first mission and, after she leaves him for the night, cheerfully telling him that she'll see him tomorrow, oblivious to the fact that it's far from certain that he'll still be around the following day.

Advantage: Macross.


NARRATION:

For the first time, Macross doesn't use the narration just to recap the situation or emphasize atmosphere, but to actually tell us what happens next. We're told about a conversation that would make for a good episode ending... except that instead of seeing the conversation, we just hear about it as the narration runs over the closing space shots. It plays for all the world as if the episode overran and the writers decided to "Captain's Log" a scene that needed to be in the episode proper.

Robotech's closing narration is also pretty bad, telling us about how the battle affects Rick when we really should be allowed to see that for ourselves. Still, at least it doesn't feel as if it's trying to make up for deleted scenes, earning it the edge this time by default.

Advantage: Robotech.

Roy tells Hikaru that he's joining the next mission, in a scene that was cut from Robotech.
Roy tells Hikaru that he's joining the next mission,
in a scene that was cut from Robotech.

CUTS AND ALTERATIONS:

Hikaru Is Shocked to Learn He's Already Assigned to Combat: Early in the Macross episode, Hikaru is gushed over by Minmay's aunt and uncle. Then Roy arrives to let him know that he will be flying in the upcoming mission. Minmay responds with enthusiasm, but Hikaru is shocked that to hear that he'll be in combat so quickly. This scene has been removed entirely from Robotech.

Slight Dialogue Change to Rick's Run-In with Lisa: After having made a thoroughly awful first impression with the First Officer, Hikaru/Rick has the misfortune to solidify that by running into her and her fellow bridge officers twice. The dialogue is slightly adjusted in Robotech, and for the better. In Macross, I winced at the awkward encounter; in Robotech, I laughed, particularly at voice actress Robin Levenson (Sammie)'s parting shot of "Lecher!"

Robotech Moves the First Act Break: Macross ends its first Act with Hikaru lying in bed, fearful about what is to come. This scene is still in Robotech - but it's moved back to after the commercial, with Act One instead ending with the unveiling of the ship's new Pin Point Barrier. Both work as Act Breaks. Still, the change illustrates the difference between the two shows: Macross goes to commercial on Hikaru's personal dilemma; Robotech, on a new plot mechanic. 

Advantage: None. Neither version is overall better than the other, though the changes strongly reflect the different priorities of the two shows.

A Zentradi soldier, frozen in terror when Hikaru invades his ship.
A Zentradi soldier, frozen in terror when Hikaru invades his ship.

INCIDENTAL MUSIC:

This episode sees the first misuse of the Robotech theme. When Lisa puts her "Daedalus Attack" into effect, it's a cue for the episode to bring in that stirring, heroic score...

Except that it's a complete mismatch for the context. The sequence begins with Rick and a Zentraedi soldier staring at each other, each equally terrified of the other. The ending narration (in both versions) emphasizes that, though he's already killed enemies who are safely anonymous in battle pods, he was not able to pull the trigger when looking in the face of a frightened living being. As written and animated, the encounter is reminiscent of the famous moment in All Quiet on the Western Front, in which protagonist Paul stares at a dying French soldier and realizes the joint humanity they share.

Lisa's plan, which destroys the Zentraedi ship and obliterates the terrified alien right in front of Rick's eyes, is not intended to be a fully triumphant moment. It's a necessity for the humans' survival; but that necessity is a tragedy, and it's intentionally framed as such... except for the Robotech score, which clashes horribly with the context.

Advantage: Macross.

Hikaru graduates with his fellow trainees, many of whom are destined to be cannon fodder.
Hikaru graduates with his fellow trainees,
many of whom are destined to be cannon fodder.

OVERALL ADVANTAGE: NONE:

I personally prefer Macross's emphasis on character. Still, a lot of that does come through in the Robotech version, even if it's a bit de-emphasized. There's at least one moment in each version that I find preferable to its counterpart in the other: Rick's awkward, comical encounter with Lisa in Robotech; and Hikaru's face-to-face with an equally terrified Zentradi in Macross. Though the episodes have different priorities, the Robotech version is generally faithful and well-written.


OTHER MUSINGS:

I can't help but wonder why Robotech changed the episode's title. Daedalus Attack makes sense in terms of the story, while Blitzkrieg is meaningless. When Capt. Gloval announces a "blitzkrieg," I half-expected his bridge crew to ask what he actually means (in Macross, Capt. Global just says "surprise attack", which is both clearer and more accurate to the actual plan).

By either title, this is a good episode. It suffers from an abrupt ending, with Macross actually using its narration as a substitute for scenes that aren't present. Up to that point, however, it's effective in balancing a character-heavy first half and an action-heavy second, and the sustained moment in which Hikaru/Rick and the enemy soldier just stare at each other is particularly effective.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Next Episode: Bye-Bye Mars

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Thursday, September 21, 2023

1-05. Transformation.

Hikaru is confused by Minmay's sudden distance.
Hikaru feels increasingly distant from Minmay.

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 7, 1982.
Written by: Sukehiro Tomita. Directed by: Noboru Ishiguro, RyƓ Yasumura.

Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 8, 1985.
Story Editor: Steve Kramer. Directed by: Robert V. Barron.


PLOT - MACROSS:

The civilians rebuild their city inside the vast interior of the Macross. Minmay pushes her aunt and uncle to reopen their restaurant, certain that it would help raise everyone's spirits and make it feel as if life was returning to normal. Though he is staying with the family, Hikaru feels increasingly distant from Minmay. He is particularly stung when he overhears her responding to some pilots' lewd suggestions by insisting that he is "just a friend."

Meanwhile, Capt. Global learns that the only way to fire the Macross's main gun would be to put the entire ship through a modular transformation. This would cause enormous damage to the city just as the civilians are settling in. Global rejects this out of hand, insisting that he "just can't do it."

Until a Zentradi attack forces his hand...


PLOT - ROBOTECH:

The civilians rebuild their city inside the vast interior of the SDF-1. Minmei pushes her aunt and uncle to reopen their restaurant, certain that it would help raise everyone's spirits and make it feel as if life was returning to normal. Though he is staying with the family, Rick feels increasingly distant from Minmei. He is particularly stung when he overhears her responding to some pilots' questions about their relationship by insisting that he is "just a friend."

Meanwhile, Capt. Gloval learns that the only way to fire the main gun would be to put the entire ship through a modular transformation. This would cause enormous damage to the city just as the civilians are settling in. Gloval rejects this out of hand, insisting that it would be "just too much."

Until a Zentraedi attack forces his hand...

The bridge crew weighs the defense of the ship against disruptions to the civilians on board.
The bridge crew weighs the defense of the ship
against disruptions to the civilians on board.

CHARACTERS:

The captain clearly feels tremendous guilt for the results of his desperate space fold on the civilians. This impacts his military judgment in a bad way. Clearly, the ship needs to be able to use its most effective weapon to defend itself. His dismissal of the only solution to this problem likely worsens the damage done when he's (inevitably) backed into a corner later.

This is not a complaint, by the way - I rather like that the characters are flawed and human. This extends to the series' hero. Hikaru/Rick has already been far from flawless in the first four episodes. Here, confused at the sudden distance from Minmay, he becomes downright sullen. It doesn't necessarily make him likable, but it's a believable and relatable reaction for someone his age.

We also discover what Minmay went back for in Countdown. No, it wasn't her diary, but rather a letter confirming that she had secured a singing audition - presumably something she didn't want to tell her family about, hence her vagueness in that episode. I still think it's a bad scene, but at least now there's some context for what had seemed inexplicably stupid at the time.

Advantage: None.


NARRATION:

Both versions are about the same with regard to narration. The voice over is used to set the scene. There's a little more narration in Robotech, but it's been pared back greatly and is no longer stepping all over the drama.

Advantage: None.

Hikaru seeks advice from a very amused Roy.
Hikaru seeks advice from a very amused Roy.

CUTS AND ALTERATIONS:

Robotech's Roy Is a Lot More Supportive: Confused by Minmay's changed attitude, Hikaru seeks advice from Roy. He asks if a woman can change overnight... and Roy responds by laughing uproariously and threatening to take the "fickle" girl off his young friend's hands. Robotech's Roy is a far better friend. He's still amused at Rick's inexperience with women, but he doesn't laugh at him (that bit's been snipped away) and he's generally supportive.

A Dialogue Change Creates a Minor Continuity Error: Just before the ship undergoes its modular transformation, a sullen Hikaru wishes that the whole city was destroyed. Robotech's Rick does not make that wish, probably because the writers felt that was pushing the character's unlikable side a bit too far. However, after the attack, as they oversee the damage, Minmei still remarks that Rick had made that wish. I'd actually call it a good change, if only the writers had kept it consistent. This already seems to be a trend for Robotech, though: A minor change is made, but lines referencing the original version are not changed along with it. I suspect it's a symptom of multiple writers working on different parts of the same episodes along with short turnaround times that kept such slip-ups from being caught.

Advantage: Macross. But only by a hair - The two versions are pretty close to identical.


INCIDENTAL MUSIC:

When the Zentradi attack, both versions use incidental cues to ramp up the drama. Unfortunately, this just makes clear how generic Macross's "tense music" is compared to Robotech's. The Macross musical sting that accompanies the alien attack sounds like it came from a studio library, while the Robotech music is considerably more distinct.

Advantage: Robotech.

The ship comes under attack!
The ship comes under attack!

OVERALL ADVANTAGE: NONE:

The two versions are so close together, the Robotech episode could just about qualify as being a straight dub of the Macross one. One minor continuity slip aside, viewers will get basically the same viewing experience from either variant.


OTHER MUSINGS:

Transformation feels like a transitional piece. In its 25 minutes, the episode covers: the civilians recreating their city and returning to normal life; relationship issues with Minmay pushing Hikaru/Rick to an important decision; and the Zentradi locating the ship. It's all efficiently done, and to the episode's credit none of this plays out as checkbox-ticking. Even so, this installment is mainly focused on moving the series forward.

Oh, and is it a spoiler to reveal that the modular transformation is to make the ship into a giant robot? No, of course it's not. it's a 1980s sci-fi anime; of course the ship transforms into a giant robot...


Overall Rating: 6/10.

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Wednesday, September 13, 2023

1-04. Lynn Minmay/The Long Wait

Hikaru and Minmay hold a make-believe wedding.
Hikaru and Minmay hold a make-believe wedding.

Super Dimension Fortress Macross: Lynn Minmay
Original Air Date: Oct. 31, 1982.
Written by: Noboru Ishiguro. Directed by: Noboru Ishiguro, Fumihiko Takayama.

Robotech: The Long Wait
Original Air Date: Mar. 7, 1985.
Story Editor: Steve Kramer. Directed by: Robert V. Barron.


PLOT - MACROSS:

Capt. Global and his crew scramble to bring not only the island's survivors on board, but also the remains of the carriers, whose weapons and fighters might prove invaluable. When Roy asks for permission to search for Hikaru, Global denies the request, refusing to compromise the safety of more than 50,000 civilians to search for one man.

Meanwhile, Hikaru and Minmay are trapped in a sealed off section of the ship. Fortunately, the ship's internal pipes provide plenty of water and Hikaru had some rations stored on his plane. But as the days pass with no sign of rescue, the rations grow thin, leaving the two to ponder a fate as grim as it is seemingly inevitable...


PLOT - ROBOTECH:

Capt. Gloval and his crew scramble to bring not only the island's survivors on board, but also the remains of the carriers, whose weapons and fighters might prove invaluable. When Roy asks for permission to search for Rick, Gloval denies the request, refusing to compromise the safety of more than 70,000 civilians for the sake of one man.

Meanwhile, Rick and Minmei are trapped in a sealed off section of the ship. Fortunately, the ship's internal pipes provide plenty of water and Rick had some rations stored on his plane. But as the days pass with no sign of rescue, the rations grow thin, leaving the two to ponder a fate as grim as it is seemingly inevitable...

Staring out at the wreckage of the city, now floating in space.
Staring out at the wreckage of the city, now floating in space.

CHARACTERS:

Both versions see Claudia continuing to gripe about the captain's space fold order. "The captain had to use that hyperspace fold," she snits - and despite Capt. Gloval berating himself in the Robotech episode... Yes, he pretty much did have to! Misa/Lisa is more professional, focusing on logistics involving contact with Earth. When a crew member reminds her that standard communication still works, she counters that they can't use it, as it would potentially give away their position.

Advantage: None.


NARRATION:

Robotech's narrator still chimes in mid-episode while Macross limits its narration to a brief recap at the start and a teaser at the end. Still, I found the Robotech narrator to be considerably less intrusive than in previous episodes (maybe I'm getting used to him?), leaving this one more or less a wash.

Advantage: None.

Minmay enjoys a shower that's a bit more modest in Robotech.
Minmay enjoys a shower that's a bit more modest in Robotech.

CUTS AND ALTERATIONS:

Acknowledging the Dead: In Macross, Capt. Global and Misa talk openly about the dead from the two carriers they retrieve, acknowledging that there won't be any survivors. Robotech dances around the deaths with this gem of an exchange:

Lisa Hayes: Captain, I can't seem to raise the Daedalus or the Prometheus... It doesn't look good.

Capt. Gloval: I see. That's bad.

It's a good thing I wasn't eating, or I would likely have choked from laughing.

Minmay's Shower: Hikaru pulls a pipe loose so that he and Minmay will have water, and she proceeds to enjoy a shower while the spray lasts. Macross provides the expected anime fanservice shot of the young girl's butt; Robotech cuts around it so that we see her legs, then cut straight to her head and shoulders.

Minmay's Goals: There are several conversations that are altered; and, since Robotech is deathly afraid of silence, even more chatter is added over previously quiet moments. Most of these make no real difference to the episode, but there is one change that I find significant. In Macross, Minmay indicates that her main goal in life is to get married, and she expresses admiration for Hikaru's focus on flying. In Robotech, Minmei tells Rick that she badly wants to be an entertainer and has taken acting and singing classes to make that happen. In this one case, I actually prefer the Robotech scene; by having both of them intently focused on something, it makes them feel more plausible as a potential couple.

Macross Minmay Gets Dramatic - and a Bit Dark: In Macross, Minmay loses hope at the end and suggests that she and Hikaru throw themselves out the airlock to die together in space. When Hikaru refuses, she becomes angry, spitting that he's "pathetic" for waiting to starve. Obviously, an American cartoon aimed at a younger audience was not about to go to such a dark place, so Minmei has a more generic breakdown instead.

Advantage: Macross.


INCIDENTAL MUSIC:

This is a character-focused episode. The closest it comes to an action beat is when the two castaways spot a giant tuna floating in space. Hikaru/Rick improvises a space suit using his flight jacket and helmet and makes a brief spacewalk to try to catch it. The scene is good in both versions - but the Robotech incidental score really works, accentuating just how much danger he's putting himself in.

Advantage: Robotech.

A tuna in outer space!
A tuna in outer space!

OVERALL ADVANTAGE: MACROSS:

Both versions of this episode have merit, and I even liked some of the alternate Rick/Minmei exchanges in Robotech. However, Robotech has a serious problem with quiet moments. In Macross, there are several bits that see Hikaru and Minmay silently absorbing their situation; in Robotech, they chatter nonstop - which gradually diminishes the effectiveness of the situation.


OTHER MUSINGS:

I'm impressed that both series were willing, this early in the run, to feature an action-free episode entirely focused on two characters and their evolving relationship. It wouldn't have been hard for Robotech to have skipped over it; a few judicious trims to the previous episode and some likely later references would have done the job.

Instead, the writers made a sincere effort to adapt an episode that most would judge as challenging for younger audiences. They didn't even do a bad job of it. It helps that the Robotech voice cast is so good - I have to give Harmony Gold credit for casting actors capable of carrying the material.

In the end, however, the Robotech version's refusal to allow the characters to just shut up please, along with some unavoidable changes for US audiences, leaves it feeling less authentically emotional than the original version. The Macross episode is very good; the Robotech episode is one that I respect more than enjoy.


Overall Rating for Macross - Lynn Minmay: 7/10.

Overall Rating for Robotech - The Long Wait: 6/10.

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Saturday, September 2, 2023

1-03. Space Fold.

The Macross risks a desperate maneuver!
The Macross risks a desperate maneuver!

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 17, 1982.
Written by: Ken'ichi Matsuzaki. Directed by: Noboru Ishiguro, RyƓ Yasumura.

Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 6, 1985.
Story Editor: Steve Kramer. Directed by: Robert V. Barron.


PLOT - MACROSS:

Roy rescues Hikaru and Minmay and takes them to the safety of the Macross, which is now in orbit. Meanwhile, the citizens of the island huddle in shelters, waiting for an all clear - while the privileged politicos gorge themselves on food and complain about the damage.

Though some Zentradi remain on the island, the enemy doesn't seem interested in attacking the Macross. This puzzles Misa and worries Capt. Global, who wonders why their attackers are "toying" with them.

The captain's fears are soon realized. As the Macross prepares to rendezvous with the fleet, the aliens open fire. They take care not to damage the battle fortress, but their attack devastates the Earth ships. In desperation, Global orders a risky maneuver - one that will have unforeseen consequences!


PLOT - ROBOTECH:

Roy rescues Rick and Minmei and takes them to the safety of the SDF-1, which is now in orbit. Meanwhile, the citizens of the island huddle in shelters, waiting for an all clear.

Though some Zentraedi remain on the island, the enemy doesn't seem interested in attacking the SDF-1. This puzzles Lisa and worries Capt. Gloval, who wonders why the enemy is "playing" with them.

The captain's fears are soon realized. As the SDF-1 prepares to rendezvous with the fleet, the aliens open fire. They take care not to damage the battle fortress, but their attack devastates the Earth ships. In desperation, Gloval orders a risky maneuver - one that will have unforeseen consequences!

The captain orders the space fold.
The captain orders the space fold.

CHARACTERS:

One area in which the series has impressed me thus far is with regard to Hikaru/Rick's piloting skills. He has consistently been clueless while trying to fly the Valkyries... which is exactly as it should be, given that the fighter is loaded with systems that are like nothing he's seen before. At the same time, each episode has provided at least one moment to showcase his innate ability: Boobytrap introduced him showing off at the air show; Countdown saw him performing a difficult (probably impossible) midair rescue of Minmay; and this episode shows him using only a booster thruster to navigate his ship to safety. This provides a good balance. He's a capable pilot - but since the military fighters are so unfamiliar, the best he can manage during this first battle is to keep himself and Minmay alive.

Advantage: None.


NARRATION:

This episode was clearly intended to still accommodate viewers who were "jumping on," and so the narration in both versions provides a fairly extensive recap of the story thus far. It feels a little too extensive in my opinion. Then again, I'm judging that from the perspective of being able to just watch the next episode on the disc, a luxury that wasn't available to contemporary viewers. In any case, there's no real difference in the style or quantity of the narration this time. In both versions, the narrators do the same thing in pretty much the same way.

Advantage: None.


INCIDENTAL MUSIC:

In my first two reviews, I've given high marks to the Robotech music. I continue to find Robotech's incidental cues to be very good, but one problem becomes clearer with each passing episode: the music is overused.

Macross allows many scenes to play out without music, which is actually quite effective, particularly in some of the moments set in outer space. Meanwhile, Robotech continues to be terrified of silence, plugging in one track or another any time the characters aren't talking. This has the opposite of the intended effect, undermining the intensity instead of enhancing it.

Advantage: Macross.

Hikaru and Minmay are amazed to find themselves in outer space.
Hikaru and Minmay are amazed
to find themselves in outer space.

CUTS AND ALTERATIONS:

"There Was Something Strange About That Pilot": The episode opens with Roy deviating to rescue Hikaru and Minmay. In Macross, Misa remarks that there was something strange about Hikaru, and she is shocked to learn that he's actually a civilian; in Robotech, Lisa accuses Rick of being an imposter, telling Roy that she's gone over the full register of pilots and can't find a record of him. I have no idea why this change was made, as it actually undermines Lisa's character. The ship has been in almost constant combat since her first interaction with Rick. If she actually took time to go over the entire crew register during the battle, it's not a sign of efficiency - it's a sign that she has no sense of priorities!

Roy's Rescue Is Severely Abridged: The Robotech trims have a noticeable impact here, with Roy's rescue of Rick and Minmei reduced from a full sequence to just a couple of shots. The result feels rushed, and it's not the only spot...

Roy Has a Surprise for Rick: Once Roy gets them safely on the vast ship, he drives them to a docking bay where he has thoughtfully salvaged Hikaru's plane. In Macross, the drive itself is a full scene, emphasizing the scale of the ship. As they drive, Hikaru and Roy banter, with Roy unveiling his gift only as it comes into view. In Robotech, the entire scene has been cut to just a couple of shots, with Roy telling Rick, "I've got a surprise for you" the instant the scene cuts in. There is no extended drive, as we cut to them arriving at their destination. As a result, Robotech viewers don't get the same feel for just how big this ship really is.

A Class Divide in the Shelters: In Macross, the politicians are shown luxuriating in the shelters, slurping down food in comfortable chairs on a higher floor, while the civilians are left to cower below. Robotech completely removes the politician half of this scene, showing only the civilians. Yes, this trims several seconds away, but I think this cut had less to do with fitting an ad in and more to do with avoiding an openly political class critique.

Advantage: Macross.

The bridge crew reacts to their dilemma.
The bridge crew reacts to their dilemma
with appropriate professional reserve.

OVERALL ADVANTAGE: MACROSS:

Relatively little is changed between the two versions, and I'd almost call it even... except that trims made to Robotech leave a few individual moments feeling rushed. It's a close call, but those cuts are enough for me to favor Macross, if only by a hair.


OTHER MUSINGS:

Space Fold is a good episode in either version. Most of its focus is on the main plot, but it finds time for small character beats. Also, even though the bridge crew ends up with more screen time than Hikaru/Rick, the script never loses track of him and Minmay, cutting back to them regularly both to keep them alive in the narrative and to show how the captain's orders end up affecting them. The episode also ends with a handful of memorable visuals, with the series' artwork continuing to impress.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Friday, August 25, 2023

1-02. Countdown.

Hikaru rescues Minmay - mostly from her own stupidity...
Hikaru rescues Minmay - mostly from her own stupidity...

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 3, 1982.
Written by: Ken'ichi Matsuzaki. Directed by: Noboru Ishiguro, Fumihiko Takayama, Yoshizo Tsuda.

Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 5, 1985.
Story Editor: Steve Kramer. Directed by: Robert V. Barron.


PLOT - MACROSS:

There's a lull in the battle, the humans having successfully turned away the first wave of the alien attack. It isn't long, however, before the Macross has detects a second wave, descending toward the ocean. This temporary respite will not last long.

Hikaru has landed his unfamiliar fighter, in robot form (!), near the home of Lynn Minmay. Roy Focker arrives to help repair his fighter, explaining some of its workings. But when the battle erupts again, Hikaru is tasked with flying the girl to safety, even though he still has only the most basic notion of how to operate the fighter!

Meanwhile, on the Macross, Capt. Global finds himself under increasing pressure to take off into space...


PLOT - ROBOTECH:

The humans have turned away the first wave of the alien attack, but the SDF-1 has detected a second wave, descending toward the ocean. It won't be long until the battle erupts again.

Rick Hunter has landed his unfamiliar fighter, in robot form (!), near the home of Lynn Minmei. Roy Fokker arrives to help repair the fighter, explaining some of its workings. But when the second wave hits, Rick is tasked with flying Minmei to safety, even though he still has only the most basic notion of how to operate the fighter!

Meanwhile, on the SDF-1, Capt. Gloval finds himself under increasing pressure to take off into space...

Minmay seems remarkably relaxed about the giant robot/planes that basically destroyed her home.
Minmay seems remarkably relaxed about the
giant robot/planes that basically destroyed her home.

CHARACTERS:

Rick in Robotech is more casual about trying to move the fighter, attempting to "throw a few switches and hope for the best." Macross's Hikaru, in the exact same scene, is nervous, clearly aware of the damage he's doing as he pleads aloud for the machine to work. Robotech's Rick is pretty open about his crush on Minmei, asking to go back once the attack hits to make sure she's safe. Macross's Hikaru has to be pushed into doing the same by Roy.

In both versions, First Officer Misa Hayase/Lisa Hayes has anticipated the captain's order to use patrol helicopters to observe the aliens' second wave. What's different is the captain's reaction. Macross's Captain Global compliments her on her efficiency; meanwhile, Robotech's Gloval complains about her being a "mind reader." 


Advantage: Macross. But the difference is considerably narrower than in the first episode.


NARRATION:

I've already concluded that I'm going to find the Robotech narration consistently more intrusive than its Macross counterpart. Similar to the first episode, Macross uses its narration lightly, really only the beginning and end of the episode, while Robotech slathers the narration over almost any moment without dialogue.

This undercuts the effectiveness of the final shots of the Robotech episode. Both versions end with Hikaru/Rick absorbing a new revelation and being temporarily overwhelmed. Macross holds this moment in silence, however, letting us absorb the significance and Hikaru's shock. By contrast, Robotech starts right in with the narration, not giving us even a second to empathize with Rick's struggle.

Advantage: Macross.


INCIDENTAL MUSIC:

The Robotech incidental music really helps this particular episode. The action-heavy second half just feels more exciting, and it's thanks entirely to the score. There is an issue with overuse, however: As with the narration, Robotech plugs in music whenever characters aren't talking. Since this is an action-heavy episode, it isn't a problem here, but I suspect it will become one in the future.

Advantage: Robotech.

The captain watches helplessly as the engines lift right out of the ship's hull!
The captain watches helplessly as the
engines lift right out of the ship's hull!

CUTS AND ALTERATIONS:

The Lull Is Shorter: The first half of the episode occurs during a temporary lull in battle. Robotech trims this lull down. I don't think any actual scenes were removed, but the editing is generally tighter which, together with the more dynamic music, takes viewers much more quickly to the action-heavy second half.

The Captain Argues Over Taking Off: The captain argues with the government official who orders him to take off. The official is a bureaucratic imbecile in both versions. The Robotech version adds an extra dollop of sexism onto his character, with him condescendingly addressing the "girls" on the bridge as he makes his exit. Then - because Robotech doesn't trust its viewers to catch anything - an additional internal monologue is given to Capt. Gloval in which he fumes, "We're just not ready!"

Roy Takes Hikaru/Rick Through the Basics: When Roy helps to repair Hikaru's borrowed fighter, he takes some time to go over the basic operations of the machine. In Macross, he goes into as much detail as the basic situation will allow. In Robotech, this is pared down substantially. "Sorry, Rick, I know you'd probably like to know more before you fly this thing, but we have toys to sell!"

Minmay's Idiocy: Minmay is safe at the shelter when the second wave hits. This is no good, though, because the script needs to get her back together with Hikaru.  The result? The worst scene in the series thus far, as Minmay becomes Officially Too Stupid to Live by running back into the city during the attack. The Robotech version alters this. Instead of going back because she "forgot something," Robotech's Minmei has a specific reason. Unfortunately, it's a hilariously stupid reason: She's worried that someone will find and read her diary. Unless she used her diary to confess to a series of gruesome serial murders... of infants and puppies... then I'd advise that neither the alien conquerors nor the human soldiers are likely to care much about the musings and fantasies of a teenage girl. I'm honestly not sure which version is worse: Macross's generic handwave or Robotech's idiocy.


Though some of the specific items I've listed favor Macross, I'm actually going to give the nod to Robotech. It comes down to one reason: pacing. There's no question the Robotech alterations dumb things down, offering broader characterizations and less detail... but this isn't an episode with a lot of nuances in the first place, so getting to the action faster ends up creating a more entertaining overall experience.

Advantage: Robotech.

Zentradi battlepods rise from the sea.
Zentradi battlepods rise from the sea.

OVERALL ADVANTAGE: ROBOTECH:

Countdown is focused very much on plot and action, which I think favors the strengths of Robotech. The edits help tighten the pace, while the stirring music greatly boosts the action scenes. In addition, because this episode is far less character-focused than Boobytrap, Robotech's weaknesses are less evident. Yes, Robotech simplifies things and does more handholding than Macross - but the overall differences are minor, and the faster pace and more exciting overall impression favors the Americanized version.


OTHER MUSINGS:

Though being "all plot" may favor Robotech, Countdown is weaker overall than Boobytrap in both versions. The entire 24 minutes feels like it exists to connect Plot Point A to Plot Point B.

There are some good visual moments. The second wave of the attack comes from the sea, and we are treated to an eerie moment in which the Zentradi battepods rise from the water before coming to land. Another effective flourish is the withholding of information about the nature of the aliens until the final shots. This allows the sophomore episode to end on a strong dramatic reveal. it also gives a good in-universe explanation for why the humans' fighters transform into robots other than just "to sell toys."

Overall, the episode is more functional than memorable on its own merits. Still, there's enough good here that I remain interested in the overall series.


Overall Rating: 6/10.

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Thursday, August 17, 2023

Review Index: Macross vs. Robotech - The Macross Saga

Left: Title Card for Super Dimension Fortress Macross; Right: Title Card for Robotech
Review Series Introduction and Rating Scale

Super Dimension Fortress Macross/The Macross Saga:
1. Booby Trap

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 3, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 4, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 3, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 5, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 17, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 6, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Oct. 31, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 7, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 7, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 8, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 14, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech - Mar. 11, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 21, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 12, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Nov. 28, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 13, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Dec. 5, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 14, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Dec. 12, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 15, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Dec. 19, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 18, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Dec. 26, 1982
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 19, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Jan. 9, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 20, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Jan. 16, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 21, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Jan. 23, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 22, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Jan. 30, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 25, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Feb. 13, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 26, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Feb. 20, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 27, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Feb. 27, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 28, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Mar. 6, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Mar. 29, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Mar. 13, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 1, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Mar. 20, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 2, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Mar. 27, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 3, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Apr. 3, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 4, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Apr. 10, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 5, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Apr. 17, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 8, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: Apr. 24, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 9, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: May 1, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 10, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross; May 9, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 11, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: May 15, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 12, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: May 21, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 15, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: May 29, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 16, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: June 5, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 17, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: June 12, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 18, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: June 19, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 19, 1985

Original Air Date - Macross: June 26, 1983
Original Air Date - Robotech: Apr. 22, 1985



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